You receive a call from someone an unexpected person. Who is it, and what is the conversation about? Go!
I have never been very good at grammar, and the art of conversational writing eludes me, so I will ask right now before I begin that if anyone has any constructive criticism, corrections or helpful suggestions, please let me know in the comments box. Please be nice though, my ego is quite fragile. 🙂
The shrill ringing of the phone brought the woman abruptly out of her reverie, “hello!” she snapped.
“Hello beautiful.” The deep, sexy voice on the other end made her instantly regret her tone. “Ah, ahem, well hello yourself, how are you?” she asked.
He chuckled before replying, “I’m just fine darling, dare I ask how you are?”
The women heaved a sigh and said, “well, I’m in a bit of a funk, you know how it goes. Hearing your voice has cheered me up a little though.”
“Well I’m glad I could be of service,” he drawled, “speaking of which, I have a four hour stop over,” his voice dropped and he practically purred, “I’d love to come over and service you very, very well.”
Feeling suddenly weak at the knees and slighty breathless she replied, “u-huh, yeah, ummm, no wait,” stop over? she thought, and fully recovering her senses, asked “ummmm, who is this? Dan?”
A brief silence at the other end and then, “No, this is Michael, Lara?”
She sputtered a little then said, “Ah no sorry, you have the wrong number,” before very gently hanging up the phone.